Portfolio: Writing III,

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Student ID:07126
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

[embed your proto-portfolios here]
http://www.ultra-bad.net/qa-undou.html　

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words)	Dear my host family	2008.04.09	4	269	0	0	0	0
Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words)	Shrec	2008.05.08	1	302	0	0	0	0
University life 08.05.18	My favorite place is here	2008.05.15	5	384	3	0	0	0
Another review 08.06.01	Do you want to diet? http://6guidec.net/ http://www.ultra-bad.net/qa-undou.html	2008.05.28	6	491	0	2	2	0
Language learning history 08.06.15	My history of study English	2008.06.11	5	510	0	0	0	0
5th essay (pending) TBA	Myself	2008.07.04	0	8 pp	0	1	0	0
Totals	---	---	21	1964	3	3	2	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My best essay in this semester is "Do you want to diet?". It is very important for everyone to good food and regular exercise. I have some reason why I choose this essay. First, I put a picture first. Second I put links. We can get a lot of good information about diet. And as I'm interested in diet, I could write about diet very well.
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	BR 1-04: Three Billy-Goats	2008.05.08	24	good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	University life	2008.05.21	44	So-so
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	My favorite place ois here	2008.05.15	53	OK
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Do you want to diet? http://6guidec.net/ http://www.ultra-bad.net/qa-undou.html	2008.05.28	491	Very good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	Nothing	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	SSYY	2008.07.10	311	Good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	Nothing	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	Nothing	Nothing

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• ...I chose Shiori's comment. The title of essay is "My favorite place is here". Shiori's comment is cute : -) I find her character in her comments.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
• You can see easy.
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
1-01	BR 1-01: Leonsrdo DiCaprio	08.04.16	62	0
1-02	BR 1-02: TAXI OF TERROR	08.04.24	120	0
1-03	BR 1-03: Small Pig	08.05.02	141	0
1-04	BR 1-04: Three Billy-Goats	08.05.08	156	0
1-05	BR 1-05: HARRY and the Lady Next Door	08.05.19	136	1
1-06	BR 1-06: The Snail Race	08.05.27	89	1
1-07	BR 1-07: Turtle and Snake at Work	08.06.06	204	1
1-08	BR 1-08: THE BIG DIPPER	08.06.17	190	1
1-09	BR 1-09: A Garden in a bottle	08.06.17	81	1
1-10	BR 1-10: Moon seems to change :-)	08.06.18	151	1
1-11	BR 1-11: Animal legends	08.06.24	131	0
1-12	BR 1-12: LATER, ROVER	08.07.03	66	0
---	---	TOTALS:	1566	7

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My best BR is "Moon seems to change". I like moon, so I read this book.As I read it, I could learn about moon. For example, how to change moon's form, relationship of sun and moon. I 'm glad to lrean.
  

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?	Y
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	Y
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	Y
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	Y
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	Y
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	Y
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	Y
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	Y
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	Y
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	Y
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	Y
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	Y
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	Y
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? __27_ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	Y
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* __11_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		N
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? _0 posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...I could type computer more fast than before.
   
2. ...I could include some pictures and glaphics.
   
3. ...I could change the color and layout in my blog.
   

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ...Everyone find my life.
  

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...We should write own blog everyday, because I could be fast to type computer. I was so glad.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
   

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