December 20~21th
I went to Aso with my friends. After TOEIC lecture, my friend came to take me in downtown. After that, other friends rode the car. We arrived in Otohime about 8 o’clock. Soon we ate dinner. We ate a lot. After that, we entered our place we accommodate. We talked so much. We held my friend’s birthday party too. We ate cake. I had overeat. We drank a lot too. I slept about 4 am. I set my alarm about 7 am, because I want to put spa. But I couldn’t wake up. We woke up 10 am. We couldn’t put spa. We left the room not to make up. We went to bread store. We ate bagle. It was so delicious. After that we went to spa. We put there about 1 hour. Though I couldn’t put spa, I had a good time there with my friends. I want to go somewhere this members.
157 words
2008年12月25日木曜日
surprise
December.15th
When I arrived my work place, my friend had arrived there yet. We talked a lot before working. She is working there than I. I was in there about December first. Then 2 people were employed besides me. I asked her that how many people did come to interview in here. She didn’t say first, but I asked more. And she said to me.
“About 50 people came here.”
I was so surprised!!!! I elected the people. I thought I have to work so hard.
86 words
When I arrived my work place, my friend had arrived there yet. We talked a lot before working. She is working there than I. I was in there about December first. Then 2 people were employed besides me. I asked her that how many people did come to interview in here. She didn’t say first, but I asked more. And she said to me.
“About 50 people came here.”
I was so surprised!!!! I elected the people. I thought I have to work so hard.
86 words
2008年12月17日水曜日
Portfolio for Writing IV,
Student ID: 07126
Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | Do you know future of earth? | 09.24.2008 | 4 | 386 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 0 |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | It is my favorite and relax place | 10.15.2008 | 6 | 460 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 0 |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | What is LOVE:)?? | 11.o4.2008 | 5 | 438 | 4 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | ★YOUTH HOSTEL CLUB★ | 11.12.2008 | 5 | 552 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | DONZYUU | 11.26.2008 | 5 | 308 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | COMPUTER ~Good point and bad point ~ | 12.15.2008 | 5 | 223 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Totals | --- | --- | 30 | 2367 | 9 | 4 | 4 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- Do you know future of earth? is my best essay that I've written this semester, because before I write this essay, I had searched a lot of web site about environments. And I like to know about environmental destruction. I thought I want to take part in volunteer for environments.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | About Canada | 09.24.2008 | 30 | good |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | "Favorite Place; School" | 10.22.2008 | 24 | best:) |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Do you know future of earth? | 09.24.2008 | 33 | perfect |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Do you know future of earth? | 08.09.24 | 132 | good |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.10.01 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 102 | so-so |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | What is LOVE:)?? | 08.11.04 | 438 | good |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.1.05 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 102 | nice |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- ...Yes. There is a sideber top of the right. I can see some comments, and there is a proto-portfolio_0.0 under location of the blog.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I gove a lot of comments with my classmates. I hope my comments makes classmates glad and happy.
- I receved a lot of comments from my classmates. When I see their comments, I felt so happy because their comments makes me glad.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | Chicken Lichen | 08.10.10 | 120 | 0 |
| 2-02 | The Ugly Duckling | 08.10.10. | 68 | 0 |
| 2-03 | TINY THE SNOW DOG | 08.10.21 | 96 | 0 |
| 2-04 | Snake Camp | 08.10.21 | 147 | 0 |
| 2-05 | Frog and Toad All Year | 08.11.09 | 100 | 0 |
| 2-06 | Harry Goes To Day Camp | 08.11.18 | 134 | 0 |
| 2-07 | Harry Goes To Day Camp | 08.11.18 | 146 | 0 |
| 2-08 | PENGUINS | 08.11.28 | 146 | 0 |
| 2-09 | Cars | 08.12.15 | 240 | 0 |
| 2-10 | Heidi | 08.12.17 | 273 | 0 |
| 2-11 | Animals that live in city | 09.01.07 | 68 | 0 |
| 2-12 | Pet Dogs and Working Dogs | 09.01.07 | 97 | 0 |
| 2-13 | Boats! | 09.01.19 | 87 | 0 |
| 2-14 | Pizza day | 09.01.19 | 143 | 0 |
| 2-15 | Harry Takes a Bath | 09.01.20 | 53 | 0 |
| 2-16 | BR 2-16: At the Zoo | 09.01.20 | 142 | 0 |
| 2-17 | The Story of My Life -Helen Keller- | 09.01.26 | 215 | 0 |
| 2-18 | Stuart little | 09.01.27 | 52 | 0 |
| --- | --- | Totals: | 2366 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- My best book review is "Heidi", because I learned a lot of things to Heidi. I want to the person who knows someone's mind. And number of this book's words was much for me, but I could read 2 days. I want to read much longer book than Heidi.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | Y | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | Y | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | Y | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | Y | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | Y | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| Y | |
| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | Y | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | Y | |
| Y | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | Y | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | N | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
| --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ... I have enhance my sentence skills in English. I think my English skill is better more than 1st semester.
- ...I have enhance my essay's sentense level. I can write essay particuality and I can compose sentence.
- ...I could peste many pictures than 1st semester.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).- ...This portfolio is very useful I think. I want to use like this in my own blog.
- ...I could write a lot of English words all the semester. I'm glad to study writing class.
- ...I'm glad to learn how to use computer in the writing class. I growed up my computer's skill.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
- ...My writing peer's blog was so cute and easy to see. I wanted to teach them how to make cute blog.
- ...I want to myself, I very did my best:)
- ...I wanted to read more English books except writing work.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
BR2-10: Heidi
I read a wonderful book, name is "Heidi". This story is a popular story, so many people know about her this story. Heidi is a cherryful girl. She lived with her aunt, but one day she is brought a mountain with her aunt. She couldn't want to go there, but they went to. There was a old man who was Heidi's grandfather. Heidi met with him, and she started to live with the old man. She afraid of the man, but he was a so kind. Heidi had learned him a lot of things. He cooked dishes for Heidi. It was not splendid, but pretty delicious. They had so wonderful days. One day, Heidi’s aunt came to their house, and she took Heidi to downtown. Heidi was so sad. After arrived downtown, she was employed to a serve. There was a big house and there was a girl. She is Clara, she was weak in her body and she couldn’t walk. Heidi made good friends with her. They had a good day, but Clara’s condition didn’t be good. She took out her to that grandfather’s house!! Heidi, Clara and grandfather spent so good time. Clara saw so beautiful mountains, lakes, flowers etc. And Clara could walk herself!! They were so glad. And they spent a good days long time.
As I had watched this story on TV, I had known. But there was a lot of things I didn’t know about Heidi. I thought Heidi is kind and have energy. I thought that if my friends have so terrible problems, I want to help and I want to hear about the person’s worry.
273 words
2008年12月15日月曜日
COMPUTER ~Good point and bad point ~
Computer is one of my necessary. I often use it. It’s very useful. Computer makes us wealthy in our life, but there are any bad points.
When I search something, I use computer. I often use Google. It’s a good search internet. There is so much information. For example, if I want to search about “Strawberry”, I type, so I can see this information about 680,000. So when I am completed my assignment, computer is my powerful partner.
Next, when I memorize new English words, I use internet soft. Its mane is Power words. It can learn new words to computer. We can learn and search from computer, but there is any bad point.
There is a lot of information in computer, but not all information is good. There is any bad information. We should watch the information to the end.
And, when I memorize new English words, I wrote a notebook until now. In fact, I can’t quite memorize to computer.
And I thought that we use too computer when we search something. As we can search easily, we rely to computer all things. Using computer is good, but relying computer is bad for me.
Computer will be more useful than now. Our life will be more comfortable. We have to think how to use computer and.
233 words
When I search something, I use computer. I often use Google. It’s a good search internet. There is so much information. For example, if I want to search about “Strawberry”, I type, so I can see this information about 680,000. So when I am completed my assignment, computer is my powerful partner.
Next, when I memorize new English words, I use internet soft. Its mane is Power words. It can learn new words to computer. We can learn and search from computer, but there is any bad point.
There is a lot of information in computer, but not all information is good. There is any bad information. We should watch the information to the end.
And, when I memorize new English words, I wrote a notebook until now. In fact, I can’t quite memorize to computer.
And I thought that we use too computer when we search something. As we can search easily, we rely to computer all things. Using computer is good, but relying computer is bad for me.
Computer will be more useful than now. Our life will be more comfortable. We have to think how to use computer and.
233 words
BR 2-9: Cars
This time, I chose this one, "Cars", because I like driving. Cars are very useful. When I go shopping in our town’s mall, I use my family’s car. When I go to school, I sometimes use it. There are a lot of cars, and so many people use it. I had thought that the person who thought of cars is so genius. I found that the person who thought of cars was Leonardo da Vinch. He invented vehicle, not cars. I was surprised because his invention was thought the 1400s. After that, Gurney’s steam coach was invented the 1700s. This vehicle’s energy is a steam. Next energy was gunpowder. I thought that people who made cars thought about how to useful cars and they worked very hard.
After that, cars progressed a lot of times. They changed from manual to automatic, tires made to rudder, roofed that we can keep back from rain. I felt the passion of professors.
About 1900s, the car that we use every day was born. And there are a lot of varieties cars in the world. We were pursuing only desire ourselves. As a result, we have brought so terrible circumstance for our earth. It’s a green gas. It was effect of exhaust gas from cars. We have to think about the future of earth, and I hope that near the future, the car that gentle for earth was made, and many people ride it.
After that, cars progressed a lot of times. They changed from manual to automatic, tires made to rudder, roofed that we can keep back from rain. I felt the passion of professors.
About 1900s, the car that we use every day was born. And there are a lot of varieties cars in the world. We were pursuing only desire ourselves. As a result, we have brought so terrible circumstance for our earth. It’s a green gas. It was effect of exhaust gas from cars. We have to think about the future of earth, and I hope that near the future, the car that gentle for earth was made, and many people ride it.
240 words
2008年12月10日水曜日
Drinking
November.26th
Our university held school festival from Octiver.31th to November.2nd. We sold “Flied bread in ice”, we could a lot of it. And our club did exhibition in our class room. Our exhibition had wonderful prize at awarding ceremony. So we held party. We went to drink in downtown. Our club member gathered about 20 people. We went to “Zyanzyan”, it was so many delicious dishes. We had much supper. We talked about school, our future and romanceJ
At 10:00 pm, we finished to eat and leave its store. After that, I went to amusement arcade with my favorite members, and took “Purikura”. And I put up at my friend’s house. I had drunk before I went to my friend’s house, but I drunk here too. I overdrunk that day. I got drunk though the night. My feel was so good and excited. I had so fun time there.
Our university held school festival from Octiver.31th to November.2nd. We sold “Flied bread in ice”, we could a lot of it. And our club did exhibition in our class room. Our exhibition had wonderful prize at awarding ceremony. So we held party. We went to drink in downtown. Our club member gathered about 20 people. We went to “Zyanzyan”, it was so many delicious dishes. We had much supper. We talked about school, our future and romanceJ
At 10:00 pm, we finished to eat and leave its store. After that, I went to amusement arcade with my favorite members, and took “Purikura”. And I put up at my friend’s house. I had drunk before I went to my friend’s house, but I drunk here too. I overdrunk that day. I got drunk though the night. My feel was so good and excited. I had so fun time there.
149 words
brainstorming
Type fast
Google
Useful, easy to exam, much information, internet, many people use
Interest, danger,
Listening, writing, reading,
Blog, we can look many people,
You tube, word, wxcel, pictures, website
Information, homepaze,
32 words
Useful, easy to exam, much information, internet, many people use
Interest, danger,
Listening, writing, reading,
Blog, we can look many people,
You tube, word, wxcel, pictures, website
Information, homepaze,
32 words
brainstorming
Type fast
Google
Useful, easy to exam, much information, internet, many people use
Interest, danger,
Listening, writing, reading,
Blog, we can look many people,
You tube, word, wxcel, pictures, website
Information, homepaze,
32 words
Useful, easy to exam, much information, internet, many people use
Interest, danger,
Listening, writing, reading,
Blog, we can look many people,
You tube, word, wxcel, pictures, website
Information, homepaze,
32 words
YOSHIMI
December,4th
That day was my friend's birthday:) Her name is Yoshimi. She is so cute and funny girl. She became 20 years old. When we had lunch in our university, we held a small party for her. We bought a chocolate cake and some snacks. After lunch, we said to her, "Happy birthday YOSHIMI!!!!". She was so surprised and glad. I gave her some presents. She was so pleasured. We had so good time there.
I go to learn another school with her. We are going to take TOEIC test in Janurary 11. It's my first exam. I want to do my best:)
That day was my friend's birthday:) Her name is Yoshimi. She is so cute and funny girl. She became 20 years old. When we had lunch in our university, we held a small party for her. We bought a chocolate cake and some snacks. After lunch, we said to her, "Happy birthday YOSHIMI!!!!". She was so surprised and glad. I gave her some presents. She was so pleasured. We had so good time there.
I go to learn another school with her. We are going to take TOEIC test in Janurary 11. It's my first exam. I want to do my best:)
103 words
2008年12月2日火曜日
LEXUS and ANA
Before a few days, I went to a car company with my friends, and I heard a lot of good things from its a consultant. I will tell you what I asked him and why I went to there.
About 2 weeks before, one of my friends told me good information. It was a nice thing. My friend are majoring Hospital and Management in our university. One day, a man came to speak lecture for my friend's students, and the man seemed to speak so wonderful lecture to them. My friend moved to his lecture, she made contact to him directly. And she got a time that we can talk to him directly. Hearing this story, I said I want to meet him and talk.
That day, we went to his company by car. His car company is "LEXUS". When I heard this chance, I really glad because I long its company. LEXUS is famous car company, its cars are high quality and more expensive than other common cars. As I'm interested in this company, when I arrived his company, I was really nervous.
We entered in office, here was so beautiful and figh-class. There were three cars. These were so beautiful and expensive, but I decided to buy its car in the future. About half an hour ago, we asked our opinion and question to him. I asked why did you decide to enter in LEXUS. He said that he had decided employment at Toyota. But a few months later, he was said from boss that he have to change work place. He seemed that he didn’t work at LEXUS first. I was surprised that I didn’t think his answer, but I cared for more his talk. When he was a university student, he worked MacDonald. He said to work a part time job is so important. As he said this talk, I started new job in December. He said that it is important to do what difference things other people. He seemed he did more volunteers, part time job, study and so on. I heard a lot of god things to him. I had so good time there.
I experienced so wonderful opportunity. I want to increase like so good opportunity.
After that, I went to watch movie with Yoshimi. I commuting her other school from November. As five movie tickets was sent to our school, we went to see the movie “HAPPY FRIGHT”. I had a good time there. After finishing the movie, we found ANA’s boss in movie theater. ANA is one of airlines. I appreciated his and his company and told a little. He was so kind.
I went back home about 10:00 p.m. I thought I met so special people today. I will don’t forget today’s experience.
463 words
About 2 weeks before, one of my friends told me good information. It was a nice thing. My friend are majoring Hospital and Management in our university. One day, a man came to speak lecture for my friend's students, and the man seemed to speak so wonderful lecture to them. My friend moved to his lecture, she made contact to him directly. And she got a time that we can talk to him directly. Hearing this story, I said I want to meet him and talk.
That day, we went to his company by car. His car company is "LEXUS". When I heard this chance, I really glad because I long its company. LEXUS is famous car company, its cars are high quality and more expensive than other common cars. As I'm interested in this company, when I arrived his company, I was really nervous.
We entered in office, here was so beautiful and figh-class. There were three cars. These were so beautiful and expensive, but I decided to buy its car in the future. About half an hour ago, we asked our opinion and question to him. I asked why did you decide to enter in LEXUS. He said that he had decided employment at Toyota. But a few months later, he was said from boss that he have to change work place. He seemed that he didn’t work at LEXUS first. I was surprised that I didn’t think his answer, but I cared for more his talk. When he was a university student, he worked MacDonald. He said to work a part time job is so important. As he said this talk, I started new job in December. He said that it is important to do what difference things other people. He seemed he did more volunteers, part time job, study and so on. I heard a lot of god things to him. I had so good time there.
I experienced so wonderful opportunity. I want to increase like so good opportunity.
After that, I went to watch movie with Yoshimi. I commuting her other school from November. As five movie tickets was sent to our school, we went to see the movie “HAPPY FRIGHT”. I had a good time there. After finishing the movie, we found ANA’s boss in movie theater. ANA is one of airlines. I appreciated his and his company and told a little. He was so kind.
I went back home about 10:00 p.m. I thought I met so special people today. I will don’t forget today’s experience.
463 words
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