Portfolio for Writing IV,

Student ID: 07126

Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1c

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	Do you know future of earth?	09.24.2008	4	386	4	2	2	0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	It is my favorite and relax place	10.15.2008	6	460	1	2	2	0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	What is LOVE:)??	11.o4.2008	5	438	4	0	0	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	★YOUTH HOSTEL CLUB★	11.12.2008	5	552	0	0	0	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	DONZYUU	11.26.2008	5	308	0	0	0	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	COMPUTER ~Good point and bad point ~	12.15.2008	5	223	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	30	2367	9	4	4	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• Do you know future of earth? is my best essay that I've written this semester, because before I write this essay, I had searched a lot of web site about environments. And I like to know about environmental destruction. I thought I want to take part in volunteer for environments.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	About Canada	09.24.2008	30	good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	"Favorite Place; School"	10.22.2008	24	best:)
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Do you know future of earth?	09.24.2008	33	perfect
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Do you know future of earth?	08.09.24	132	good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.10.01	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	102	so-so
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	What is LOVE:)??	08.11.04	438	good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.1.05	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	102	nice

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ...Yes. There is a sideber top of the right. I can see some comments, and there is a proto-portfolio_0.0 under location of the blog.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• I gove a lot of comments with my classmates. I hope my comments makes classmates glad and happy.


• I receved a lot of comments from my classmates. When I see their comments, I felt so happy because their comments makes me glad.
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Chicken Lichen	08.10.10	120	0
2-02	The Ugly Duckling	08.10.10.	68	0
2-03	TINY THE SNOW DOG	08.10.21	96	0
2-04	Snake Camp	08.10.21	147	0
2-05	Frog and Toad All Year	08.11.09	100	0
2-06	Harry Goes To Day Camp	08.11.18	134	0
2-07	Harry Goes To Day Camp	08.11.18	146	0
2-08	PENGUINS	08.11.28	146	0
2-09	Cars	08.12.15	240	0
2-10	Heidi	08.12.17	273	0
2-11	Animals that live in city	09.01.07	68	0
2-12	Pet Dogs and Working Dogs	09.01.07	97	0
2-13	Boats!	09.01.19	87	0
2-14	Pizza day	09.01.19	143	0
2-15	Harry Takes a Bath	09.01.20	53	0
2-16	BR 2-16: At the Zoo	09.01.20	142	0
2-17	The Story of My Life -Helen Keller-	09.01.26	215	0
2-18	Stuart little	09.01.27	52	0
---	---	Totals:	2366

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My best book review is "Heidi", because I learned a lot of things to Heidi. I want to the person who knows someone's mind. And number of this book's words was much for me, but I could read 2 days. I want to read much longer book than Heidi.
  
  

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	Y
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	Y
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	Y
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	Y
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	Y
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	Y
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	Y
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	Y
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	Y
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	Y
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	Y
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	Y
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? __3_ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. Book review (22) diary (8) essay prep. (7) Essey (6) favorites (3) Minnesota diary (22) Movei reveiw (5) Typingtest (14)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	Y
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	Y
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? __17_ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	Y
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? _12__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		N
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? _0_ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ...Sorry, I didn't post mesia. ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... ...Sorry, I didn't peste media. ...	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ... I have enhance my sentence skills in English. I think my English skill is better more than 1st semester.


2. ...I have enhance my essay's sentense level. I can write essay particuality and I can compose sentence.


3. ...I could peste many pictures than 1st semester.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...This portfolio is very useful I think. I want to use like this in my own blog.


• ...I could write a lot of English words all the semester. I'm glad to study writing class.


• ...I'm glad to learn how to use computer in the writing class. I growed up my computer's skill.
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...My writing peer's blog was so cute and easy to see. I wanted to teach them how to make cute blog.
  
• ...I want to myself, I very did my best:)


• ...I wanted to read more English books except writing work.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).


2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   


3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   

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